Monday, April 30, 2012

Which Synopsis Do You Like Better?

   I currently have two working synopsis's for my upcoming novel, Future Dreamer. Please leave a comment and tell me which one you like better! Thanks.

1.  In the return of the Impenetrable Spy, special agent Zack Carter's oldest friend has been murdered and the crime has been pinned on Zack: his prints are on the gun and now he's on the run. With agents on his tail and danger ahead, Zack races from Nigeria to Chicago to Langley itself in a search for the truth. And the deeper he goes, the more he realizes he's been caught in a conspiracy of apocalyptic proportion. Now he must clear his name and stop the true killer before time runs out ... and the world goes up in flames.


2.  Five years has passed since the events of The Impenetrable Spy. Zack Carter’s oldest friend has been murdered. The gun is covered in his fingerprints. Now on the run, Zack has to pit himself against CIA agents while trying to uncover the truth. He has to clear his name before things get out of hand. When he stumbles onto something bigger he must go on several missions through locations including Nigeria, Chicago, CIA headquarters, Germany, and France.

11 comments:

  1. The first one, definitely. It's exciting, makes you curious, and flows smoothly.

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  2. The first one!

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  3. I read both with a movie trailer voice in mind and number one just sounds more exciting. Great job!

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  4. Haha, thanks! I like the first one much better too. It makes you want to read it more.

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  5. The number two. I wanna read that. I do like suspense and investigatory books. That must be really mysterious. Can't wait to read it

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  6. Thanks Emily. I'm surprised that you didn't pick number 1, but this is why I am having a poll. Everyone has different opinions. Thanks!

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  7. I definitely like the first one best!

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